Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Wednesday, December 18, 2013

Poetry Jam



always on the outer
never part of a group

she's what you call a loner
never part of a team

somtimes she finds a recruit
who invariably disappoints

so she buries herself in writing
shares interesting thoughts with the cat

and like a ghost
wanders everywhere - invisible

observing everything
she no longer wants









8 comments:

  1. Wow. I really relate to this one. I feel this way lately. "observing everything she no longer wants". But no cat to talk to. ;-)

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  2. Great description of feeling on the outside. I think most everyone can relate to this from one time or another in life. Some more often than others. Thanks for posting during this busy season.

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  3. Shrouded by sadness, she still subsists. Thoughtful writing.
    -HA

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  4. Some people like to be by themselves.

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  5. it's a lonely place to be on the outside yet some people don't mind at all and find their niche and way to enjoy life as well... i sometimes talk to cats...more to dogs though...smiles

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  6. sometimes it's good to be alone and sit face to face with self.....

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  7. I talk to all animals . . . mum was out visiting me recently and thought I was a little crazy. :0)

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  8. We sometimes all feel like this, excluded fromt eh company of others and learning to survive using our own defence mechanisms...
    I enjoyed reading this.

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