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Sunday, March 16, 2014

Foreplay with Poets United


poets united


she thought it was cute
at the very beginning
now she's changed her mind

she tried to teach him
how to stay up late-this was
quite the big mistake





what is her problem
playing violin in bed
is so romantic

it's not a french horn
i could understand  her mood
if that were the case

some women are strange
how many guys can play the
violin so well

22 comments:

  1. Haha :-) Thanks, you made my day with a real big smile. Well written
    ZQ

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  2. Is this purely based on the movie or is it also about something else? Either way I like it!

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  3. I, for one, would adore a man playing violin in bed! Enjoyed this!

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  4. I enjoy the deft touch you show here - I was smiling too... With Best Wishes Scott

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  5. Thank you... "deft touch"...such a nice compliment:)

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  6. I guess there is a time and place for everything. Smiles.

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  7. Very good.

    But how unsympathetic she is ... Lol ... The poor man is driven to pursue his art and passion. What can he do?

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    1. Mrs Dodo told me she is fed up with your bagpipe playing in bed:)

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  8. i wish i knew how to play the violin actually
    always thought it pretty cool when paw did it
    on little house...yeah...the french horn is not
    so sexy...in bed.

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    1. You look a bit like Nigel Kennedy. He is a good fiddle player:)

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  9. haha...such enjoyable lines...:D

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  10. There's nothing like a good fiddle in bed.

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  11. I think you have to stay awake while you are playing:)

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  12. Ha.. or imagine a bag-pipe.. a violin would be great in comparison...

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  13. She'd need a big bed to host the violin as well!

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