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Wednesday, March 5, 2014

The Odd Couple

Three Word Wednesday



if you are decrepit
it matters not
you are the butterscotch ice cream
to my rock melon

it may not seem credible
but i will let you wear my
pullover if it gets cold

if i seem pensive and remote
it is only because
i am thinking of you
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7 comments:

  1. Jae RoseMarch 5, 2014 at 9:20 AM

    Sweet as butterscotch ice cream..cheered up a chilly afternoon in this readers house!

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  2. Sheilagh LeeMarch 5, 2014 at 9:24 AM

    I love this it's so sweet.

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  3. PriyaMarch 5, 2014 at 10:14 AM

    "you are the butterscotch ice cream to my rock melon" Perfect! Lovely poem, and I adore that picture.

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  4. AnonymousMarch 5, 2014 at 10:54 AM

    Sweet! Nice job.

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  5. Old EggMarch 5, 2014 at 12:25 PM

    I like the way your mind showed us some unusual images. Poets are pensive and remote and in that way we can be delighted by their quiet thoughts.

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  6. J Cosmo NewberyMarch 5, 2014 at 10:53 PM

    That's sweet. Even without the butterscotch ice-cream it is sweet.

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  7. Belva Rae StaplesMarch 7, 2014 at 7:39 AM

    This is so clever and sweet.

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