Amazing! just when the reader breathes a sigh of relief the third line knocks us over...beautiful haiku!
Love this:)-
Rallentanda,this is a mysterious one!! The word Mirage here is so apt and thoughtful.
Searching, searching -- perhaps it was all about the journey ---How many times have we reached our destination and found that it wasn't what we'd hoped for --Enjoyed this haiku --
Searching in vain, yet never losing hope ... beautiful :-)
A mirage or not, maybe the believing part is the most important.. without that we will be utterly alone.
Amazing! just when the reader breathes a sigh of relief the third line knocks us over...beautiful haiku!
ReplyDeleteLove this:)-
ReplyDeleteRallentanda,this is a mysterious one!! The word Mirage here is so apt and thoughtful.
ReplyDeleteSearching, searching -- perhaps it was all about the journey ---
ReplyDeleteHow many times have we reached our destination and found that it wasn't what we'd hoped for --
Enjoyed this haiku --
Searching in vain, yet never losing hope ... beautiful :-)
ReplyDeleteA mirage or not, maybe the believing part is the most important.. without that we will be utterly alone.
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