Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Monday, January 12, 2015

TRY



if you love her
try a little tenderness
make her happy



try to understand
that four million people
may have a point




never give up
try try again  -  that makes you
a winner, a mensch




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7 comments:

  1. Reading PleasureJanuary 12, 2015 at 5:19 AM

    Nicely done, Rall.

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  2. AliceJanuary 12, 2015 at 6:22 PM

    "four million people may have a point" I especially like that you wrapped this thought into a haiku. You've amazed me again. :-)

    https://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2015/01/12/agora/

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  3. jazzytowerJanuary 12, 2015 at 9:06 PM

    Nice set.

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  4. Bastet's Waka LibraryJanuary 12, 2015 at 11:15 PM

    great set ... and full of spirit as always! :-)

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  5. AnonymousJanuary 12, 2015 at 11:16 PM

    Great ones Rall!

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  6. Kokila guptaJanuary 14, 2015 at 1:37 AM

    Amazing set ... enjoyed all , special mention to the second... yes, they may have a point ! right :)

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  7. payal agarwalJanuary 17, 2015 at 5:05 AM

    Yes! never give up! lovely set of haiku. :)

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