Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Sunday, February 15, 2015

One Way Trip


carpe diem haiku kai

train to nowhere
no one waved goodbye
clickety clack

8 comments:

  1. I believe I know where this train went---to Auschwitz or to Terezin...

    Train for All Seasons

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  2. So few words, so much left to the imagination - really excellent

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  3. Such a nice, mysterious quality in these verses. MMT, great take on where nowhere might be.

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  4. Thanks Janice...erm not MMT although we both write quirky stuff:)

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  5. I'm glad not MMT, my spirits picked back up. That photo is a scene setter though. Nice haiku.

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  6. The discarded suitcases told the story...genocide.

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  7. Nicely done ---- I won't try to interpret -- but it's deep and mysterious and lonely. Beautiful.

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