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Sunday, April 19, 2015

The Pass Byron Bay


haiku horizons


we used to swim
at the pass byron bay
seven years ago

will not return
been there done that  - time moves on
and so did we

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  2. Reading PleasureApril 20, 2015 at 8:35 AM

    Trip down the lane.

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  3. AliceApril 20, 2015 at 8:35 AM

    What a nice poem. It makes me want to go there and swim.

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  4. UnknownApril 20, 2015 at 5:55 PM

    I love how you used "pass" as a place but continued with the prompt in the second haiku...lovely!!

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  5. Bastet's Waka LibraryApril 21, 2015 at 10:26 PM

    Good use of the word .. all things pass even those things we love .. beautifully done.

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  6. Kokila guptaApril 23, 2015 at 1:17 AM

    Nostalgic.... And true ..
    Very nice :)

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  7. jazzytowerApril 26, 2015 at 5:14 PM

    That time has come and gone, time has passed on...Nicely done!

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