Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Tuesday, June 2, 2015

120 Days To Go





dreams beneath the  fur
a world of waves and white sand
counting down the days

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9 comments:

  1. UnknownJune 2, 2015 at 9:51 AM

    A very mysterious haiku...read your great ebook and left comments on CDHK page

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    1. rallentandaJune 3, 2015 at 5:05 AM

      Thank you for your nice comments about my ebook!

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  2. rallentandaJune 2, 2015 at 7:35 PM

    Swimming season starts in October...120 days away....for me not swimming in the sea is like being robbed of your limbs. Northern Australia is hot now but is infested with the deadly sea wasp which kills you in minutes so no swimming there. I am not a heated swimming pool person.

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  3. J Cosmo NewberyJune 3, 2015 at 2:36 AM

    Now is the winter of our beach lament...?

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    1. rallentandaJune 3, 2015 at 7:02 PM

      now is the season
      of wine steak and mushroom pies
      sleeping under fur

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    2. J Cosmo NewberyJune 4, 2015 at 2:28 AM

      There has to be some consolation. I'd like a log fire but the environmentalist in me wiggles a chastising finger...

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  4. JaniceJune 3, 2015 at 8:15 PM

    Of what is one dreaming? You did well leaving it to the readers devices.

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  5. ChèvrefeuilleJune 4, 2015 at 6:17 AM

    A very nice haiku Rall ... I hope you do like your e-book.

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  6. rallentandaJune 4, 2015 at 6:33 AM

    Thank you so much KP. I am extremely chuffed!

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