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Rallentanda

Friday, July 29, 2016

For The Weekend


Saturday Winter Morning


i sit here looking out
at that cloud
which has been changing shape
all morning

the rose petals drop
on to the silver tray
the jacaranda tree is perfectly still

i crumple the ' to do ' list in my hand
listening to rufus and clattering
coming from the kitchen
smells of coffee and toast
waft my way

i cannot get out of bed
i have made all of this
far too comfortable
created a monumental temptation
to thwart any  constructive activity

even if the fire alarm went off
i doubt if i could drag myself
from the warmth
of my fur rugs and soft pillows


17 comments:

  1. Hello> Those days when you can't get out of bed, sheer bliss. But then somehow the guilt takes over "oh maybe I should be doing such and such". Certainly conveyed that chilled feeling.

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  2. I could happily hibernate for the entire winter. It seems such a natural thing to do. Must be the koala bear genes:)

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  3. I quite like getting up and doing things in the morning. But central heating plays a big part in that. I hope you get more than just the smells of coffee and toast!

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  4. Inner city people tend to be night owls! Cheerful energetic morning folk are not seen much in these parts:)

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  5. Hang on; isn't that what we are supposed to do on Saturday?

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  6. that winter is dancing with glee is evident here...in a summer country (where i stay) like ours winter is a dream to enjoy....

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  7. the rose petals drop
    on to the silver tray
    the jacaranda tree is perfectly still

    Beautiful images... !!!

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  8. My Sunday morning was quite the same, when I woke to a miserable wintery day...definitely one to stay in bed and crumple the to-do list.

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    1. crumple was the word I was looking for...Thanks:)

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  9. I slept in this morning as the rain lulled me further into dreams. You have captured the feeling well.

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  10. It sounds very comfy indeed, especially as you are, I believe, in winter now, the proper time for fur rugs and soft pillows, with which my room abounds.

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  11. I really like the whole poem, but this is my favorite section:
    "which has been changing shape
    all morning

    the rose petals drop
    on to the silver tray
    the jacaranda tree is perfectly still"

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  12. I love those days when the weather dictates my mood for cuddling, warmth and immobility. Hope you enjoyed it!

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    1. I did indeed ! And we are having a long weekend here in NSW so more of the same today:)

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  13. It sounds idyllic! And beautifully described. :) I think a day of rest and self-indulgence is also a constructive activity!

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  14. Yes! Waking in the morning is all I need for a good day :)
    ZQ
    I enjoyed the reading with a smile.

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