mirror mirror
on the wall
hanging there
so blue and tall
you know my secrets
every one
as i struggle out of the bath
with a soap bubbled bum
it comes as a surprise
your glass has not cracked
from the vision of an outback venus
arising arthritic wet and wacked
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Haha. This is precious. I can so much relate to it.
ReplyDeleteOh the image that's conjured up by "outback venus, arthritic wet and wacked". Thank you for my morning chuckle!
ReplyDeleteI love the sparkling wit and humor here :D Beautifully executed.
ReplyDeleteI LOVE this!!!!!! The mirror is likely smiling as kindly as we are. What a gorgeous bathroom that is.
ReplyDeleteChuckled at this. Very good
ReplyDeleteThis explains my mirror!
ReplyDeleteHahaha! Oh this will make me enjoy my morning ablutions so much more!
ReplyDeleteWell, the mirror itself is very beautiful,lol. (And seriously, some of us do not even have baths any more because we'd never be able to climb out again at all; it's showers forever after.)
ReplyDeleteI am sorry the bath did no good. I can't understand why mirrors are so large in bathrooms now as I have seen enough of me over the years I don't want to see more.
ReplyDeletethe vision of an outback venus / arising arthritic wet and wacked'..lol...the mirror smiles surely :)
ReplyDeleteWhat a hoot
ReplyDeleteYour mirror holds many mysteries of thee