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Rallentanda

Tuesday, April 25, 2017

Chatting With A Cool Cocky






my luve is like a cockatoo
a brash and tough old prancer
my luve is like a disco song
a cute but nerdy dancer

as fair art thou, my feathered boy
so deep in luve am i;
but not with you my parrot bird
tis another who makes me fly

till one of us bites the dust dear bird
and the rocks melt with the sun:
i will luve him still, sweet larrikin bird
till  the sands of time have run


Mid Week Motif  -  Poets United



15 comments:

  1. This is so imaginative

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  2. Sounds like one lucky cockatoo! I agree with Martin... I love how imaginative you are.

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  3. What fun! I love a poem that leaves me with a smile!

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  4. Love this! What a wonderful response to today's prompt.

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  5. Oh I like this so much. I'm smiling.

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  6. Haha! I crack up whenever I see this video--and now i'm smiling at your clever poem too. May your love last even longer!

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  7. Well the Sulphur Creasted Cockatoo really got into the swing of it didn't he? What an excellent post.

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  8. I love this so much! Snowball cracks me up!!!!!!

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  9. A beautiful response to the prompt. I enjoyed this piece!

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  10. I agree, this is absolutely stunning!!❤️

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  11. Ha ha ha, I luve it. And I bet Burns would too.

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    1. I knew you would get the reference.I hope Burns wont mind too much:)

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  12. Your poem made me 😁 smile. Luv the video too

    Much love...

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