Cinquain
at last
i've reached the coast
safe journey well done girl
a swan and a red boat greet me
hi there
lovely
time for a swim
flying fish everywhere
now i know why it's called shoal bay
oops shark
small one
not to worry
it prefers fish to me
that is what i am presuming
at least
small shark
its mum's somewhere
usually close by
c'mon girly do not tempt fate
get out
WOW what a most awesome Cinquain sequence. I needed this. Happy Sunday to you Rall
ReplyDeletemuch love...
Oh boy, I would not tempt fate with even a small shark....a great adventure!
ReplyDeleteI love the two very different types of boat. Adding the shark lent an element of urgency to the peaceful scene.
ReplyDeleteI think one has to watch out for sharks. I do like that swan raft and wouldn't mind floating around on it :)
ReplyDeleteSuch an incredibly breathtaking cinquain!!😍💖
ReplyDeleteAh, one should not mess with sharks- either in the ocean OR on land. It is on land that the sharks are most dangerous, I fear.
ReplyDeleteSwimming in tropical waters is always a mixture of exhilaration and fear! Great poem.
ReplyDeleteOh this made me chuckle. Love the photos too. Hope you have a wonderful time.
ReplyDeleteHaha beautiful but "get out!"
ReplyDeleteZQ
Ah, the joys of Australian beach life!
ReplyDeleteDiscretion, they say, is the better part of valor. Get out of the water!
ReplyDeleteYes. Please get out of the water!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
love this sequence of cinquains.
ReplyDeletei like the light-hearted way they were written, a very refreshing change from its usual mood.
enjoyed the read. :)