Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Sunday, September 23, 2018

A Modern Sonnet


always the one who settled for crumbs

better than nothing she thought to herself

fear of alone being left on the shelf

boy did she hang with some terrible chums





who masqueraded as interesting types

conceptual artists so cool they were

wearing rings and beads and covered in fur

smoking this and that in ornate hash pipes


deep in her centre she knew this a lie

time to move on stop settling for less

leave them all to their perennial highs

hit the road see what happens i guess


cross fingers and  toes and learn to fly

up up and away from this earth bound mess



15 comments:

  1. "hit the the road see what happens'...Best way to clear the mess.

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  2. Choices choices.
    Happy Sunday Rall


    Much🎶💛🎶love

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  3. Lol, i know that girl! Yes, she must fly higher.

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  4. Love the last couplet! One feels that it's easier, sometimes, to admire others and it takes time to invest in oneself.

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  5. It's good of her to move on from these masquerading types. An interesting verse — dating is never easy especially when the people one engages with are like this.
    -HA

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  6. Hahaha been there, done that, and left without the tee shirt : )
    ZQ

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  7. It is curious when young how we used to demean ourselves to fit in to what we thought were the right or exciting crowd. However I soon found that there were others taround who were interested in art, music and life generally and not all that keen on getting drunk every night.

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  8. Eventually we learn – such as these are NOT better than nothing!

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  9. Yes! A sonnet with rhyme in all the right places!
    Those "who masqueraded as interesting types" get left behind, one hopes, when Woodstock is possible. Great choices--I enjoyed this very much.

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  10. Sometimes, often times, the road is the best option. That's why we have intuition, isn't it?

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  11. Loved this poem, always good to know when you've outgrown people.

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  12. The masquerading types are never easy to hang around with.. better to move on!💜

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  13. Some times we just gotta pull up our petticoats and hit the road...
    Anna :o]

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  14. If only there were a way to flee this earthbound mess (other than the obvious, of course).

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