Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Tuesday, August 4, 2020

Things that Make Me Smile

i smile


at your comforting words
when you tell me to keep warm
that i have a place in your heart
that you care about me
and at the moment
this means more to me
than the bright blue sky
the white horses galloping across the sea
my beloved rock pools
even chocolate sponge cake

Weekly Scribblings. #  31 -PSU






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13 comments:

  1. Gillena CoxAugust 4, 2020 at 11:40 PM

    Absolutely luv your last line😊brings home the message
    Happy Wednesday

    Much💝love

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  2. Rosemary Nissen-WadeAugust 5, 2020 at 12:27 AM

    Oh, can't argue with any of that! All those things are worth smiling about, none more so than the personal care and affection.

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  3. Kim M. RussellAugust 5, 2020 at 5:33 AM

    Your poem has made me smile, Rall, especially the last three lines.

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  4. Sanaa RizviAugust 5, 2020 at 8:54 AM

    This is beautiful! You've got me longing for some chocolate sponge cake 😃

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  5. Samyuktha Semi JayaprakashAugust 5, 2020 at 11:13 AM

    couldn't stop smiling after the last line! :D

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  6. ayalaAugust 5, 2020 at 1:08 PM

    A sweet poem!

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  7. Old EggAugust 5, 2020 at 4:15 PM

    Love beats them all...especially fruit cake. If you had written fruit cake that would have been different!

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  8. JennaAugust 6, 2020 at 9:11 PM

    I like the last line especially. haha

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  9. Magical Mystical TeacherAugust 8, 2020 at 4:17 PM

    I don't know...I'm rather fond of chocolate sponge cake myself.

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  10. purplepeninportland.comAugust 8, 2020 at 5:54 PM

    Great last line!

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  11. J Cosmo NewberyAugust 8, 2020 at 8:10 PM

    Even chocolate sponge cake? Est tu fou?

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  12. Ron.August 9, 2020 at 9:39 AM

    Yum. The sponge cake AND the poem!

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