Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Wednesday, September 30, 2020

Nancy Wilson, When October Goes

 

 For Marguerite Eugenie Florrimonde

 

 when october goes winter is close

 her sweet sadness folded in russet leaves

 sprinkled across gardens 

and wind swept city streets 

 

 when she travels south 

she puts on her yellow wattle skirt 

places a hibiscus in her hair

 and smiles a lot at the sun

 

 the stork left me in the petunia patch

in october many years ago

my mother found me there

and kept me

 

 the stork returned 

said it was the wrong address

 my mother said bugger off 

she's my little october thrill

she's staying 

 

Weekly Scribblings # 39 ....OCTOBER THRILLS

11 comments:

  1. It is not often I laugh out loud but this poem really set me going. I bet that stork had a long face when she heard your mother's determinaion to keep you!

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  2. Luv the travel to south verse best
    Happy Wednesday

    Much💓love

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  3. I love the mother's response. It painted a smile on my face, and goodness knows I can use a smile today. Thank you!

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  4. Petunias, eh? You lucky. February's stork left me in a snowbank.
    Great stuff.

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  5. Fall is my favorite season, but I hate that it ushers in winter. I too love your mother's response to the stork!

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  6. This is so beautiful, Rall! I love the use of colour, the thought of ‘sweet sadness folded in russet leaves’ and your mother telling the stork to bugger off – good for her!

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  7. This is one of my favorite Nancy Wilson recordings, thank you for including it. And ~ I love the poem.

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  8. October in her yellow wattle skirt - (of twigs and branches interwoven - I looked it up) BEAUTIFUL. A poem to sink into. And what a voice Nancy Wilson has. Thank you.

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  9. I love your Mum's response, and my guess is you've been her little October thrill all these years. I enjoyed the poem!

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