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Rallentanda

Wednesday, October 15, 2025

W3 # 181.... A BOP POEM...FRIDAY WRITINGS #198...POETS AND STORY TELLERS UNITED

entering a dance competition
fierce rivalry with super talent
how to win
not going to be easy
finding the right partner
and stayin' alive
you should be dancing 

there's a lot more 
to finding the right partner
she has to be a good dancer as well as a good sort
a great hairstyle and moves are not going to do the trick
uh oh  i think we're on to something here
worth gut punching the air 
found her at last...she can dance



dancing dance yep dancing dance
you should be dancing





we glide together effortlessly
the crowd loves us
as a mater of fact i think i love her
we make magic together
getting a  bit distracted here
got to remember the steps
you should be dancing
 



A BOP POEM 

A bop poem has three stanzas and a refrain that repeats after each stanza.  tells a story or explores a problem, a bit like a mini-drama.

  1. First stanza – 6 lines
    Present a problem or situation.
  2. Refrain
    A single line that repeats after each stanza. Think of it as the poem’s chorus.
  3. Second stanza – 8 lines
    Expand on or explore the problem in more depth.
  4. Refrain
    Repeat the same line.
  5. Third stanza – 6 lines
    Show a solution or a failed attempt to solve the problem.
  6. Refrain
    Repeat it one last time.

15 comments:

  1. I love this fun piece, and thanks for the instructions on the form.

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  2. You should be dancing yeah You did make me dance!

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  3. Great! Now make the video of you dancing to Saturday Night Fever and Rosemary will put it on as a prompt. Cant wait !:)

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  4. Good job on a hard write. The songs in music fit right in. Dancing? I have two left feet. But my partners generally teach me the two step again at our start.

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  5. now that is boppingly very fantastic!

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  6. We should all be dancing! I'm glad the narrator was successful in finding a partner.

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  7. A toe-tapping, jiving poem! Nice to visit your dance floor - Jae

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  8. LOL, this was fun! I want to dance a little too.

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  9. This so reminds me of my grandma. She was such a wonderful dancer- I mean like clear the floor and everybody eyes on her and her partner good. She danced well into her eighties and was as limber and spry on the dancefloor as anyone half her age! Thanks for the memories.

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  10. I love the playful groove of this one, Rall — it really feels like you’re dancing your way through the poem 💃

    Much love,
    David
    SkepticsKaddish.com

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  11. Goodness that clip takes me back 💃! ♥️

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  12. hi, Rall❣️

    Just wanna let you know that this week's W3, hosted by our beloved Sarah Whiley, is now live:

    W3

    Much love,
    David
    SkepticsKaddish.com

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