we do need the rainit's droughts or flooding rains herein the wide brown landno not for the faint heartedyep you've got to cop it sweet
One extreme to the other.
The images in your poem are wonderful, Rall!
Rall, your poem beautifully conveys the complex relationship between the environment and human endurance🙌
The contrast are well placed. I like this.
That was Selma Martin— selmamartin.com 🙇🏻♀️
is it the clouds, the land or a narrator speaking the last line, or all of them?
Love the combination of physical and written images. Very striking.
The weather is quite unpredictable these days.
I love that tough, grounded voice here, Rall. It really captures the no-nonsense resilience of living on that “wide brown land.”Much love,DavidSkepticsKaddish.com
Rall, a lovely descriptive poem!
Hi, Rall❣️Just wanna let you know that this week's W3, hosted by our beloved Marion Horton, is now live:W3Much love,DavidSkepticsKaddish.com
One extreme to the other.
ReplyDeleteThe images in your poem are wonderful, Rall!
ReplyDeleteRall, your poem beautifully conveys the complex relationship between the environment and human endurance🙌
ReplyDeleteThe contrast are well placed. I like this.
ReplyDeleteThat was Selma Martin— selmamartin.com 🙇🏻♀️
ReplyDeleteis it the clouds, the land or a narrator speaking the last line, or all of them?
ReplyDeleteLove the combination of physical and written images. Very striking.
ReplyDeleteThe weather is quite unpredictable these days.
ReplyDeleteI love that tough, grounded voice here, Rall. It really captures the no-nonsense resilience of living on that “wide brown land.”
ReplyDeleteMuch love,
David
SkepticsKaddish.com
Rall, a lovely descriptive poem!
ReplyDeleteHi, Rall❣️
ReplyDeleteJust wanna let you know that this week's W3, hosted by our beloved Marion Horton, is now live:
W3
Much love,
David
SkepticsKaddish.com