Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Sunday, June 21, 2026

TANKA TUESDAY CHALLENGE NO 70.....LAI FORM







music filled with heart
beauty love and art
lovely
you broke us  apart
the hurt still kicks start
deeply
meet again we shan't
bridges burnt we can't
sadly

6 comments:

Eugenia said...

You lai is lovely and well done, Rall. - Eugi

Gwen Plano said...

Sadly, indeed. Well done, Rall.

Ron. said...

awesome

Anonymous said...

Great poem Rall you got the immense feelings of loss that a broken relationship can cause 💔 The music is lovely too 💜💜

Anonymous said...

Hi Rall that was my commitment... willow 💜💜🙏

Sunflower Tanka Anthology said...

Rall, I think this is excellent. In just a few words you said so much. 🩷