Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Wednesday, April 14, 2010

Cleave the light Fandango

You go to my head I am yours
like a sip of sparkling burgundy brew with love
and I find the very mention of you a song in my heart
like the kicker in a julep or two and joy to the world
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10 comments:

  1. Uma GowrishankarApril 14, 2010 at 8:04 AM

    Oh this is so good.

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  2. UnknownApril 14, 2010 at 9:07 AM

    Sweet!
    Howcome yours looks effortless and natural, when mine is like something beaten with a brick.

    oh god--the captcha code was:

    blerg

    that may be my new word of disgust

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  3. rallentandaApril 14, 2010 at 9:29 AM

    Good word...' blerg'

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  4. AnonymousApril 14, 2010 at 9:35 AM

    This is a sweet poem. I also like what you did with the Einstein pic. :-)

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  5. RobinApril 14, 2010 at 10:33 AM

    Really...can you make it look any easier please?! Ok, another great post, Rall.

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  6. MarianneApril 14, 2010 at 10:59 AM

    Rich and golden ... just a little gem! I love these cleave poems!

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  7. rallentandaApril 14, 2010 at 3:26 PM

    Thankyou everyone for your generous comments

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  8. LoriApril 14, 2010 at 5:07 PM

    Fantastic!

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  9. flaubertApril 14, 2010 at 5:22 PM

    Effortless Rall!
    Pamela

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  10. lifeuponlifeApril 14, 2010 at 8:32 PM

    Nice one!--sweet and flows well...

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