Napowrimo Poem Day 4
Prompt...Inside Out...Outside In
Hot already
Gonna be a stinker today
C'mon son get the gear off
watch the sun rise and
commune with nature
Behold the wonder
of the natural world
Right...now that's done
get dressed
so you won't be late for school
Quick as a... flash :)
ReplyDeleteCool collage!
Oh my god...nudity! Shouldn't there have been some sort of warning?
ReplyDeleteStill, I Managed to survive the , um, exposure.
Well done.
Very funny, Rall. That's my kind of communing - via the TV, I mean, not running naked! Happy Easter to you too.
ReplyDeleteWe will have to get you over here and on to a surfboard.Derrick! You too Ron!
ReplyDeleteFun poem. I like it!
ReplyDeleteclever, rall.
ReplyDeletelove the cartoon!
Good - really made me laugh :)
ReplyDeleteBrilliant choice of image Rall, just loved it -- and your written piece was spot on...
ReplyDelete...rob
Image & Verse
Love the graphic that goes with your poem. Funny and quirky! Thanks for a lighthearted view of today's prompt.
ReplyDeleteRall,
ReplyDeleteQuite clever! Happy Easter to you!
Pamela
nice Rall....funny 2...no surfing for this kid....too many spills on snowboard this winter....dam young guys cruisin by me
ReplyDeleteThis one turned me inside-out giggling.
ReplyDeleteHow witty! I love this - what a great life that would be. We're all too serious - at least, maybe I am. Thanks for writing this - a smile of appreciation as I'm off to work this Easter Monday morning.
ReplyDeleteGood to have a giggle Francis.
ReplyDeleteEaster Monday is a public holiday here Wanda.
Sorry you have to work today in Germany.If you ever need a little cheering up you can always read my transliteration poems in German/English. Don't show them to your colleagues..you might get fired!
This made me laugh. You capture a nice conversational tone for it. We actually did the same kind of thing in college, lol. If you would like, http://novaheart.wordpress.com/2010/03/15/woodward-and-bernstein-and-minnow/
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