we walk past doyles
past the wafting aromas
of lobster thermidor
and garlic bead
past the dinghies
on rusty chains
past the tinkling sail boats
never failing to gasp
at the aching beauty
of the marquesite brooch
set against black velvet
in the distance
past the fishermen cottages
past the intrusive mansions
picking posies for the kitchen vase
and on to the cove
we stare at the ferries gliding by
slowly silently like fluorescent
caterpillars
we stare at the floating marker buoys
and without saying anything
we know it will break our hearts
to leave this
past the wafting aromas
of lobster thermidor
and garlic bead
past the dinghies
on rusty chains
past the tinkling sail boats
never failing to gasp
at the aching beauty
of the marquesite brooch
set against black velvet
in the distance
past the fishermen cottages
past the intrusive mansions
picking posies for the kitchen vase
and on to the cove
we stare at the ferries gliding by
slowly silently like fluorescent
caterpillars
we stare at the floating marker buoys
and without saying anything
we know it will break our hearts
to leave this
This is lovely, Rall! I especially liked "marquesite brooch set against black velvet," and
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This just puts me in the mood to be there
ReplyDeleteSimply lovely Rall
Pamela
Beautiful: reminds me of the two wonderful years when we lived in Seychelles. Thanks for the memory.
ReplyDeleteViV
Stunning visuals. Each line better than the previous. I absolutely feel this.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written Rall, love your ferries that are like fluorescent caterpillars.
ReplyDeleteThis is a special poem for me. I am always impressed by the finely attuned antennae of some of you who seem to know this instinctively.I think it is called sensitivity. Thankyou and it is my pleasure to share it with you.
ReplyDeleteThe sharp pause after the end-word "anything" made my day. The fluidity of the lines before that word, read in a rush, adds to the impact of the long pause, the effect of which adds to the ending's. The 'pinch' is intensified.
ReplyDeleteThanks SL.
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