3WW...drag penetrate mumble
every word
every grain of truth
has to be extracted
like teeth
dragged from the mumble mire
of ingrained deceit
nothing can penetrate that
dangerous inscrutable elusive charm
a pot pourri of patchouli incense
sprinkled with gun powder
Well that is an interesting combination of patchouli and gunpowder. Even my teeth felt on edge.
ReplyDeleteThis has several wonderful word constellations: "mumble mire of ingrained deceit", "dangerous inscrutable elusive charm", "patchouli incense sprinkled with gun powder" ... Thanks!
ReplyDeleteThe puppet master lurking back there..doused in incense..luring us in..you have such a diverse range of topics in your noodle...Jae :)
ReplyDeleteHi Rall, that last line's eXPLOSIVE!
ReplyDeleteThanks oldegg. Interesting but not recommended combination i.e. not if you want to keep your bits and pieces together:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Leo..glad you liked my star words!
ReplyDeleteNot in my noodle jae...in my life!
ReplyDeleteGeez you're a hoot Andy:)You haven't visited me here for yonks!
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