Such an interesting tale of a gypsy king crushing down walls. Hmmmm. I can picture the whole scene. Love the writing on the leg with black marker bit :)
Thank you all for your generous comments. My poem seems very tame in the taboo department compared to most of the poems submitted. Writing about sex has always been a stumbling block for me.
Such an interesting tale of a gypsy king crushing down walls. Hmmmm. I can picture the whole scene. Love the writing on the leg with black marker bit :)
ReplyDeleteHa,thanks Lori. A black marker message on a leg can be surprisingly erotic (if you've had enough champers!:)
ReplyDeleteOh my.. been there before ( years ago I will admit)..but on the leg? very cool..
ReplyDeletenicely compressed poem..
mmm...nice...short and to the point, well writ...on the leg, how intimate...
ReplyDeleteLove the last line - it speaks volumes to the scene. Great job!!!
ReplyDeleteSexy and risky - good choice for the prompt!
ReplyDeleteIncredibly creative especially with the art.
ReplyDeleteI too am very impressed maybe inspired.
I am smiling...Excellent erotic read.
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Thank you all for your generous comments.
ReplyDeleteMy poem seems very tame in the taboo department
compared to most of the poems submitted.
Writing about sex has always been a stumbling block for me.
The last lines come out of nowhere. Brilliantly :)
ReplyDeleteExcellent write - sometimes less is more!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]