Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Friday, November 16, 2012

For The Weekend - Haiku Heights



waving legs and arms
greeks like  tree branches swaying
to down under tunes

a surreal sight
lots of giggles and laughter
go for it wog boys

14 comments:

  1. From " Kings Of Mykonos..Wog Boys 2"

    'Wog' does not have the same disparaging connotation
    as it does in other countries. It can be an affectionate greeting here depending the manner in which it is spoken and the degree of familiarity.

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  2. such a summery sight this haiku creates for me... ah i miss the summer already...

    Ta Tarun

    http://unshakenthoughts.wordpress.com/2012/11/17/tree-and-little-i-a-haiku/

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  3. Did I hear an echo of that old schoolyard song...

    "Souvlaki's great after a couple of beers,
    Messy, messy meal of the pissed is he,
    ...

    ???

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  4. Fun words in your haiku. Enjoyed them.

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  5. laugh kookaburra laugh
    kookaburra gay your life must be

    methinks,these lines would now get you a punch in the head in the schoolyard Cosmo:)
    Rallentanda

    Thanks Ta Tarun, Susan and Anthony.

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  6. Go for it.. what fun..loved it here..

    RS:)

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  7. Fun haiku! I like it!

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  8. Thank you all. Glad you enjoyed a giggle!

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