I love your line "acres of sky". Your poem reminds me of one my friend wrote called "A Silent Walk" about how life moves to fast to appreciate the "birdsong and bush" or to see "ancient dinosaur prints".
aloha Rallentanda - i particularly like this: "dinosaur prints - and acres of sky" - these are concrete images with a unique twist to the ku. very cool. aloha.
Thank you Anthony. The Liverpool Plains is the remains of an extinct volcano that erupted 17 million years ago.Dinosaur relics have been found in the area but nothing at my place:)
I love your line "acres of sky". Your poem reminds me of one my friend wrote called "A Silent Walk" about how life moves to fast to appreciate the "birdsong and bush" or to see "ancient dinosaur prints".
ReplyDeleteThank you Daisy
ReplyDeletealoha Rallentanda - i particularly like this: "dinosaur prints - and acres of sky" - these are concrete images with a unique twist to the ku. very cool. aloha.
ReplyDeleteThis set is a beautiful description of the nourishing aspect of silence. Thank you for sharing. I love the acres of sky!
ReplyDeleteA lovely place you're in.
ReplyDeleteThank you Anthony. The Liverpool Plains is the remains of an extinct volcano that erupted 17 million years ago.Dinosaur relics have been found in the area but nothing at my place:)
ReplyDeleteLovely and I love the line acres of sky, a place I want to be in.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rick and Brudberg
ReplyDeleteacres of sky! wow, nice phrase
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I like the respite from the traffic and noise.
ReplyDeleteIt seems that you welcome the respite from noise that can be found only in silence!
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nice :)
ReplyDeleteTHANKS EVERYONE FOR YOUR COMMENTS
ReplyDeleteinspiring haiku!
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