
he dreamt of a friend
to share this lovely moment with
he will search for one
Day 2

i knew doris day
before she was a virgin
said david niven
Day 3

doing a favour
helping someone when needed
enjoying it too
Day 4

the little child asked
is their haiku in heaven
yes boomed thor's hammer
Day 5

dodo's deliv'ring
a small package in nappies
another grandpa
Day 6

sometimes i wonder
why i must struggle so much
some help would be nice
Day 7

modern day mantra
my god is me - what's new
wonderful world eh?
Day 8

sometimes i can see
how it looked before back then
a few bits remain
Day 9

life was very tough
mildred was a good woman
but made bad choices
Day 10

i do like clothelines
there's something reassuring
about them in situ
God I hope for everyone's sake Dodo isn't involved in the delivery!
ReplyDeleteMe too!
ReplyDeleteEnjoying to help - always always.
ReplyDeleteYes a true gentleman helping naked ladies in distress.
DeleteCommon, toughen up! Towels and hot water, you'll be fine!
ReplyDeleteThey don't have towels in Scotland...He will have to use old kilts.
DeleteAnd very cold water.
DeleteInteresting that a Nordic god would know about Japanese poetry!
ReplyDeleteGods usually know everything...even Nordic ones!
DeleteOh, you have a wicked sense of humour :-)
ReplyDeleteHa...thanks !
Deletei think we can see
ReplyDeletewhat happens when our god
is us---you get narcisists
lined up on each side
lobbing grenades at each other
i like clotheslines too
smell of the breeze
in the clothes
Yes.. narcissists breeze and clothes...good title for a poem !
ReplyDeleteSo many of these made me laugh. So true, what's new about "my god is me."
ReplyDeleteAnd...sigh...I really miss clotheslines & the way clothes hung out USED to smell.
I am most fortunate that I am one of those rare people who still has a clothesline in the city and I actually use wooden props in the country.Pleased I gave you a Sunday laugh....18 more to go...will put on another lot next weekend !
ReplyDeleteloved those witty pieces...and felt sorry for the good one making a bad choice..sigh
ReplyDeleteMildred Pierce is well worth seeing. Available on DVD.
ReplyDeleteLoved Thor's hammer!!
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful site to visit, as usual :-)
ReplyDeleteZQ
This made me grin...delightful set :)
ReplyDeleteinteresting to see a week in these hiakues.. loved the last one, can relate to it!
ReplyDeleteWitty.
ReplyDeleteI especially love the one about needing help - I need some too! And I LOVE clotheslines - so comforting, so domestic. Have always loved them.
ReplyDeleteWhat a creative piece! Loved this!
ReplyDeleteNice little set of haikus!
ReplyDelete#s 4 and 10 are my favorite! The hammer and the clothesline are often my god and goddess figures. Bravo on all.
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