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Wednesday, April 30, 2014

Sunset For Poetry Jam

 
almost everyday
i would walk outside in my apron
and look at the tree pencil drawings
delicately outlined against the horizon

cows in yellow plastic earrings
would low softly
as the sun descended
quickly behind the mountains
throwing up an instant chill

the richly  technicolour cinematic beauty
was just too splendid a performance
all the time
like eating rich creamy pavlova
every day





for the first time i understood
why all of the early settlers homes
had frosted glass
they just did not want to see outside

16 comments:

  1. Not wanting to see outside is not necessarily a bad thing, is it? Maybe the frosted glass can lead to introspection.

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    1. Introspection is necessary to meditate and reflect without distraction. You are being very profound lately MMT

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  2. ha. what is it about sunsets that make us think cake...that is funny....
    the opening scene of this, sounds so peaceful to me...i would def want to see it...
    but maybe you are right, like cake, too much of a good thing and you lose the flavor...

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  3. The visuals, your words... combined, they make me want to eat all the cake. Beautiful ending to poetry month.

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  4. The pavlova is an Aussie invention made of meringue fresh cream, lots of berries and passion fruit...to die for! Before anyone shuffles off this mortal coil they should experience Sydney rock oysters and Pavlova( not together of course:)

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  5. Interesting contrasts in this--the beauty and then the beauty being too much. I am not sure I could ever get tired of lovely sunsets though. LOL

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  6. Rich creamy Pavlova love this image and this really works and paints the picture. Well Done.

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  7. I love Pavlova ... Making it is a challenge, but so worth it! Nicely done ...

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  8. Pavlova is ethereal ... cows with yellow earrings and cow pies in the barnyard ... not so ethereal. I'd go for the frosted glass too ... wink!

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  9. love the lines painting delicious beauty...

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  10. The idea of living in a place where you can see the sunset over a horizon appeals to me... Here it tends to disappear behind buildings or trees somehow... This was a very beautiful description.

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  11. I love the picture you've put into my mind! Awesome poem!

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  12. Never had Pavlova but it looks wonderful, just like your poem. Especially love those pencil trees :-)

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  13. Technicolor you certainly caught...

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  14. Lovely poem, evoking wide-open spaces and jewel-like sunsets.

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