Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Sunday, July 6, 2014

Haiku Horizons



hey,where's the party
i used to be a cool cat
not a wall flower



after the party
some of us bounce into bed
some don't quite make it
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18 comments:

  1. kaykualaJuly 6, 2014 at 6:32 PM

    The party can start and end with some trying moments. Though some are more adept to reconcile than others. Nicely Rallentanda!

    Hank

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  2. Maude LynnJuly 6, 2014 at 8:44 PM

    That last one cracked me up!

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  3. Ankita July 6, 2014 at 9:47 PM

    hahah! I loved the first one :D

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  4. PierreJuly 7, 2014 at 12:20 AM

    Too much absinthe?

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  5. LocomenteJuly 7, 2014 at 5:03 AM

    Lol for the 2nd one...
    Loved both!!!

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  6. Robin Leigh MorganJuly 7, 2014 at 5:23 AM

    I enjoyed reading your endeavors, however the logic escapes me in your first one. If you used to be a cool cat, not a wallflower. To me it means nothing has changed and you've returned to your past.

    Used to be wallflower
    Now no longer a cool cat.
    Am wallflower again.

    [Wrote my response here as another Haiku]

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  7. Ramesh SoodJuly 7, 2014 at 5:32 AM

    Indeed some never make it.. lovely haiku..
    Have a look at the story I have weaved here..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2014/07/a-helpless-moon-haiku.html

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  8. kalpana solsiJuly 7, 2014 at 5:50 AM

    And what a bounce.

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  9. UnknownJuly 7, 2014 at 7:18 AM

    the second one was downright hilarious! well done :)

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  10. Sumana RoyJuly 7, 2014 at 7:47 AM

    o my i really laughed at the cute wall flower that's lost its feline grace... :D

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  11. Reading PleasureJuly 7, 2014 at 10:33 AM

    Fun and interesting takes!

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  12. AnonymousJuly 7, 2014 at 10:55 AM

    hehe ! i love the second one ! awesome ! what a take !

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  13. AnonymousJuly 7, 2014 at 4:25 PM

    So funny! A great post. :)

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  14. WabiSabiJuly 7, 2014 at 5:00 PM

    Before or after the party, I could never do anything that agile!! Can you? :)

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  15. rallentandaJuly 7, 2014 at 7:03 PM

    Of course !....I 'm an Aussie...We get into bed every night like that:)

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  16. Amrit SinhaJuly 8, 2014 at 11:55 AM

    Ha ha ... quite hilarious :D

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  17. AnonymousJuly 8, 2014 at 5:22 PM

    What a good laugh. Just what I needed. ;-)

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  18. jazzytowerJuly 9, 2014 at 11:16 AM

    This is so funny.

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