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Tuesday, July 29, 2014

Taken For A Ride


dverse


i'm riding pillion
on his bike
my hands around his waist
the sun is out
the fields are green
we laugh and joke and race
then all at once
the sky turns black
and terror fills the space
when suddenly i realise
i've never seen his face

8 comments:

  1. I could see that dream to nightmare scenario

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  2. From light to dark... personal heaven, to what could be hell... nice.

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  3. well, waking up next to putin
    would be a nightmare...ha...seeing that face
    and knowing that identity colors everything,
    eh?

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  4. This is BRILLIANT. That 'road trip' feel with the added twist.

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  5. That would be like riding a bat out of hell.

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  6. The terror of the unknown of the stranger..hmm..odds are pretty good..he won't kill you..i think..and who knows may be even be a friend...
    half glass full and all of that..hehe!
    smiles..:)!2!

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  7. brilliant start leads to startling conclusion, love it, thanks for sharing, Kevin

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