mirror leaves rain
butterfly chrysanthemums breeze
star clouds ocean
daisies cowshed secret
cro swims in wet leaves
the pool a murky mirror
in the pouring rain
cro butterfly strokes
chrysanthemums adorn his
knitted breezy trunks
gets out of the pool
the feint stars blinking through clouds
to cook ocean trout
secret recipe
is hidden in the cowshed
under the daisies
now the secrect hiding place is no more a secret ◕‿◕｡) have a nice weekend
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A great story you've woven here -- I really like the pool as a murky mirror.
ReplyDeleteAh.. you have to share the secret recipe.. I'm hungry for trout
ReplyDeleteinteresting story you've woven
ReplyDeletenow - why is that recipe in the cow shed.
My life in haiku. Luckily the pool is still open, but it won't be long before it returns to that sad state.
ReplyDeleteI was restricted by the form and the given words and I know you don't hide your recipes in the cow shed either...poetic license:)Next one will be better ...in free verse. Thanks for calling by and for sharing your lovely snapshots of daily life in SW France
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Rallentanda this is fantastic. You must have enjoyed writing it.
ReplyDeleteThank you Usha. Yes I did. I love writing.
ReplyDeleteI love the verse and the culmination in the recipe...
ReplyDeleteCool ... like the idea of a secret recipe ... great full circle!
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