three little maids from
school are we carrying leaves
on the old oak tree
we must hurry for our tea
yes three little maids are we
one green leaf for you
yum yum, another one for
you miss soon yeti sun
we must run before it rains
yes three little maids are we
it's late afternoon
must be home before it's dark
leaves as umbrellas
what a lark fun in the park
yes three little maids are we
I love how your brain and muses worked in tandem to have such fun.
ReplyDeleteI like this 6-stanza renga Rallentanda ... gorgeous and with a smile ... thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteOh! I loved this little sing song story!
ReplyDeleteYour poem and the three little maids from school gave me several minutes of smiles and chuckles.....thanks.......opie
ReplyDeleteThis is so cute -- it really brought a giggle! :)
ReplyDeleteThis is such a nice song for little children. I'd encourage you to set a tune to it :)
ReplyDeleteAlso loved the thought of a 'yeti sun.' Have never looked at the sun that way before. Lovely!
Very lovey lines and idea.
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