Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Wednesday, September 17, 2014

River




an avalanche struck
grief crushed her, king hit, she cried
a river of tears

6 comments:

  1. Rallentanda, this is so poignant. Loved it.

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  2. Like an old legend from the hills far beyond. Very nice.

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  3. Oh .. so so sad ... and you got so much in this ku ... fantastic write.

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  4. Yes, there would be a copious--maybe never-ending--river of tears.

    Old River Chanting

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  5. Such a different take on river. excellent.

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