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Saturday, September 6, 2014

Cinquains Full Of Surprise

Surprise is the greatest gift which life can grant us

Boris Pasternak





                                
                                      surprise
                                  out of the blue
                            something unexpected
                     never in one's mad wildest dreams
                                     tongue tied

                                        it's true
                              these things happen
                      sometimes somewhere some place
                     follow your dreams believe in love
                                        it works
                          

16 comments:

  1. Believe in love - the essence of hope and so well expressed

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  2. Surprise.
    What this poem did for me.
    I
    Hate
    Surprises
    Normally.
    But this one I liked.

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  3. Oh, to be caught unawares! Wouldn't that be lovely?

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  4. There are good surprises leaving us flabbergasted.. Stunned.. Skillfully penned cinquains

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  5. It is good to believe there are always surprises ahead.

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  6. wonderful! Yes my day always begins with surprise and wonder.
    ZQ

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  7. Belief works! Surprise is pleasure when it is of love.Thanks.

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  8. good surprises are always welcome :)

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  9. flying the flag of love, very nice, have a good Sunday, thanks for dropping in at my blog

    much love...

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  10. Oh yes!!! Believe in love. Wonderful lines here. And at times love can definitely surprise you.

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  11. Fireworks are always a pleasent suprise. Love or otherwise.

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  12. Thank goodness for sweet surprises... and belly laughs.

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  13. the best kind of self-fulfilling prophecy ~

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