wise.
Thoughtful -- there's almost a novel in these brief lines!
Ha...My thoughts were of a novel too! Haiku has more impact I think, than the tanka !
Your Tanka is great Rall .... reads like a short story there is a lot happening in that verse.
Love them both. Lots to ponder. Love the music too.
wise.
ReplyDeleteThoughtful -- there's almost a novel in these brief lines!
ReplyDeleteHa...My thoughts were of a novel too! Haiku has more impact I think, than the tanka !
ReplyDeleteYour Tanka is great Rall .... reads like a short story there is a lot happening in that verse.
ReplyDeleteLove them both. Lots to ponder. Love the music too.
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