Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Wednesday, June 10, 2015

Bombs Away



3WW
erect blemish lopsided

she was good at
erecting castles in the air
creating an unblemished world
filled with magic

they were built on a foundation
of nothingness  and a need to take flight

she held her breath for a long time
on that last ride through the clouds
knowing the minute she exhaled
the lopsided castles would come toppling down

and they did

impregnated with shrapnel and a bomb
with her name on it


5 comments:

  1. How important it is to anticipate the reaction to our decisions. But foolish decisions are often made on the spur of a moment...or stupidity!

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    1. Spoken from a lofty high ground position or alternatively another case of head in the clouds!

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  2. Building castles in the air may seem foolish but perhaps we all need them to escape to at times...shame there is always a bomb to drag us down..although perhaps when we float to our next castle we can build in some defences - soldiers..a draw bridge..a moat..and a big 'leave me alone' sign.. (polite version) - fantastic title also

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