Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Saturday, June 6, 2015

Shadorma


Mindlovemisery's Menagerie

she jumps through
a ring of fire
burnt and scorched

the next time
she will not be mesmerised
by the flames

5 comments:

  1. Perfect. Having jumped through some hoops lately this really speaks to me!
    Great writing.

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  2. I can tell lately that you have. Poetry reveals so much about a person. Things will get better...for both of us (Smiles)

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  3. Ooohh...I'm with Jen....but those flames are so damn mesmerizing!! This is great, Rall, really tight and so relatable!!

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  4. This is a much better way of saying "Once bitten, twice shy".

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  5. The scorch marks should be worn as medals of achievement. There're not real. Keep jumping; keep risking; keep being honest.

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