Rallentanda
Saturday, April 2, 2016
For The Weekend
still swimming
in glorious
autumn sunshine
to handel harp tinkles
in a pool
with small lizards
dragon flies
covered in
pink peppercorns
and leaves
in the heat
of the midday sun
i think of you
your writing scrawled
over this decades old tape
das klangermusik
i think of you
the shrieks of laughter
lifting the beast
on to a mattress
in the back of a station wagon
tootling off to a concert
to play this
i think of sir o e
your professor
his elegant crossed legs
a small pipe dangling
seductively from the side
of his mouth
and you
you wicked minx
torturing that poor man
with your insanely overpowering beauty
they were wonderful days
her shadow
tinkling on the harp
her beauty
inspiring
she gave it all up to be
a dutiful wife
B & P's Shadorma and Beyond
MLMM
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Wow! this is such an inspirational form.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully executed!
Lots of love,
Sanaa
There's a big blank in between your title and the first line of the poem...I guess there might be a video. My net is so slow that I couldn't enjoy it if it's there. Brrrr...love the poem specially the last stanza, so heartfelt....this is my second attempt at commenting, hope it publishes...
ReplyDeleteAm in the outback at the moment. Definitely rubbing two sticks and tom tom drum territory...very poor reception here too.
ReplyDeleteThat seems a lot to give up for marriage. What did he give up to be married? Loved the music and your writing but still felt sad at the end.
ReplyDeleteYou're a bloke...you should know the answer...NOTHING!
ReplyDeleteLove this response to Robin :-P
DeleteHaha...enjoyed this response to Robin's comment ;-)
DeletePink peppercorns..we will savour those..it is a risk...going from the back of the car to the front seat..but then risk brings forth sunshine and harps..even for a small moment
ReplyDeleteOh, what a sad end.
ReplyDeleteyou've captured an age old story with your beautiful words
ReplyDeleteThis is an intriguing tale, we'll told. I love the repeated I think of you......
ReplyDeleteThis is really beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteThe music coupled with the images your words evoke.....a divine orchestra for the senses.
ReplyDeleteSuch a sacrifice indeed....a beautiful write Rall!
ReplyDelete"in a pool
ReplyDeletewith small lizards
dragon flies
covered in
pink peppercorns"
"i think of you
the shrieks of laughter
lifting the beast
on to a mattress"
"a small pipe dangling
seductively from the side
of his mouth
and you
you wicked minx
torturing that poor man"
♥
Whoa! Well done.
ReplyDeleteZQ
Sometimes we give up too much of ourselves..but, I think of you ..leaves me wondering what one really thinks???
ReplyDeleteOh I agree...it seems sad to give it all up to be dutiful!
ReplyDeleteDonna@LivingFromHappiness
That's so sad. It seems true love does not demand anyone give up anythin.
ReplyDeleteSplendid post ... but oh how terribly sad that yet again it was she who gave everything up to be a dutiful wife ... sigh ... Bastet
ReplyDeleteIf its true , then love really exists ! Wonderful Rall !
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