Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Saturday, October 2, 2021

Sunday Muse # 180


 she had not looked 

into a mirror for years

terrified of what

she might see

 

 

the other day

she approached a complete stranger

at the check out

excuse me...am i beautiful?

.no.... he said






16 comments:

  1. Well, dang! She had to bump into the one truthful man in the city!!

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  2. I think the stranger needs a good swift kick in the pants. I love that second image of art Rall. Always glad to see you at the Muse!

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  3. Dang! Nothing like a dose of truth at the checkout counter. That will be $49.95. Paper or plastic?

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    1. Ha...this poem was inspired by George Costanza!

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  4. Self loathing is always a terrible thing. It makes for good poetry, though.

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  5. It hurts so much to have self-doubt. It hurts so much to be vulnerable when some callous oaf doesn't take an opportunity to make a stranger's day beautiful.

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  6. Ha, brave to ask the question. But hope she disregarded the answer.

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    1. George Costanza is a character in Seinfeld whose insensitivity and lack of empathy is truly hilarious (well to my min anyway:)

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  7. This gives me a chill--that obsession & the randomness of the reply is like hearing a match strike and waiting...

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  8. But, beauty is in the eye of the beholder, and George was always very blunt ...

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  9. Well now, that was fierce

    Happy Sunday

    Much💜love

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  10. This is funny. What a curmudgeon!

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