Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Tuesday, January 23, 2024

Tanka Tuesday Challenge no 18

   SHADORMA

 

to cool off

in a rock pool

is my dream

 scorching heat

am a wilting sunflower

in need of a drink




3 comments:

  1. "am a wilting sunflower in need of a drink" - what a great line! Bravo!

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  2. I think some of us would enjoy just a breeze from your neck of the woods. :) I hope you make it to the rock pool. That sounds refreshing.

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  3. Sunflowers are my favorite flowers! I can completely connect with that kind of heat. Great poem, Rall!

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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