Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Wednesday, July 17, 2024

Whats Going On....ELEGY

 SHADORMAS

FOR MY CHINA

 

he could walk

before the damn stroke

he could drive

he could speak 

now he is a sad shadow

of his former self

 

i watch him

wither on the vine

day by day 

heartbreaking

must keep strong to care for this

precious dear person

 

what matters is

he is still with me

that's what counts

he's still here

please God help him recover

your prayers are welcome 





7 comments:

  1. Aww, it is so sad to watch a loved one struggle with illness. I love that you write the main thing is he is still here. So true.

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  2. Your poem shows how hard it is to care for someone who has had a health crisis, but good that he is still there with you and that there IS hope for recovery.

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  3. "heartbreaking
    must keep strong to care for this
    precious dear person" Your love comes through for both what was and what is. Bless you!

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  4. This hits home for me. For over a year now I have watched my husband walk his journey through cancer, see how weak he's become, how hard he is working to regain strength.

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  5. I am unable to leave a comment on your blog...so I left one on your superb poem on the What's Going On Comment site. Take care and courage dear Susie. You have been through a lot !

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  6. My mother had a stroke and a heart attack and I am glad she is still here. - True

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  7. Your words are full of prayer and strength, Rall. May they smile again and make all smile. My prayers. May he be well soon.

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