MIRROR CINQUAIN
so small
so cramped this flat
the balcony gives her
some welcome relief from squalor
poor love
flowers
to look at placed on a table
pretends it's a garden
she sips her tea
and dreams
CINQUAIN
surprise
what a great view
when the door is open
a beautiful summer's day is
revealed
CINQUAIN
teaching
him the piano
is not an easy thing
there are a lot of distractions
it seems
him the piano
is not an easy thing
there are a lot of distractions
it seems
All of these are gorgeous, Rall! Thank you for participating!
ReplyDeleteYvette M Calleiro :-)
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
Breathtaking and vivid, with and without the images.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poetry, Rall. - Eugi
ReplyDeleteFantastic take! I am distracted by the scars on the woman's neck and arm.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poetry (and I love the images) 🌹
ReplyDeleteLoved all three of these, so different, but yet I found a sense of hope in each one. Evocative.
ReplyDeleteNature can really soothe.
ReplyDeleteand life is indeed full of distractions.
What beautiful selections- and the accompanying artwork is splendid too!
ReplyDeleteThe words beautify the images. Beautiful indeed. Thanks Rall. Xo, Selma.
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