Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Wednesday, June 11, 2025

Tanka Tuesday Challenge No. 16....FULL MOON...Tanka Puente





it's a full moon tonight
a strawberry moon down here
moon watching in oz
it has been nineteen years
since we last saw a fruit moon

"Go slowly my lovely moon, go slowly" Khaled Hosseini

freezing cold outside
go slowly my lovely moon
blush sans moi this time
must wait  nineteen years again
so until then go slowly


1 comment:

  1. Oh, lovely, Rall. The quote placement is between the two tanka. It acts as a bridge between the two tanka. Often it leads us to another meaning. I know it's cold for you now. Stay warm, my friend. 🌺

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