Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Thursday, June 18, 2026

FRIDAY WRITINGS # 232...POETS and STORY TELLERS UNITED....teeth bloom hammer

                                             her false teeth didn't work
                                              it led to her woes


CINQUAIN

she danced
rose in her teeth
her time to bloom again
hammering out her song having 
a ball



 

7 comments:

  1. How cleverly you compiled the words into a lively little poem.

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  2. I shall dance as long as I can too! Even if my movements may not look as graceful as they did in my 30's, I'll still have fun.

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  3. there is nothing like a woman in love with the sheer pleasure of dancing... and holding a beer without spilling... heck yeah!...love flamingo... my mom would watch flamingo ... when i was little i would wear my moms heels and flamingo away with castanets... stomping and twirling my skirt... what joy and exhilaration it brought me breathless and i'd flop to the floor...

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  4. I always love your wit and humour! Jae

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