3WW..Haiku Heights
Flars4me
jonquils are four dollars
at least these will cheer me up
it is getting cold
autumn once again
you can't imagine how much
i truly miss you
3WW
no ultimatums
no lame lanky excuses
no nasty verses
pointless destruction
is so unworthy of you
just come back to me
Haiku Heights
Story
ours never began
so it does not have an end
even a middle
a glow in the dark
that grew radiant then dimmed
snuffed out by good sense
When it comes to glory of feel, one wouldn't mind skipping summer. Some summers are just unbearable!
ReplyDeleteNicely Rallentanda!
Hank
One of my favorite songs from one of my favorite movies--coincidence that I just found a DVD copy of it in a thrift store and was getting ready to watch it again in the next day or two?
ReplyDeleteMe too..you have excellent taste Timoteo:)!
DeleteGosh who would not love this song? I found an old video copy of it yesterday ..watched it and was inspired to write. Coincidence? or are the those mischievous Greek Gods having some fun...hmmmm!:)
nice use of the season to infuse feeling in the longing and missing...
ReplyDeletenicely done
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ReplyDeleteIsn't it strange that women buy themselves flowers but (I assume) men rarely do. I loved the 3WW piece I even thought of sending you flowers for it
ReplyDeleteSmiles...thank you for the flowers you did not send:)
ReplyDeletea glow in the dark
ReplyDeletethat grew radiant then dimmed
snuffed out by good sense
It's a real pity! It should continue! Nicely Rallentanda!
Hank
I have never been sensible when it comes to matters of the heart Hank:)
Deletelove the way you can tell a story in just 34 syllables. the 3WW piece especially-- nicely done!
ReplyDeleteThank you Joanna.
DeleteBeautifully poignant haiku on Story
ReplyDeleteThank you Reading Pleasure.It is one of my favourites!
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