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Thursday, May 9, 2013

Terza Rima Sonnet




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i look out on to the blue sky and palms
 leaves in  flutter so autumn intense
three more short weeks i  drive back  to the farm

must be ageing  losing my common sense
city vibes sing ' i want to stay longer '
chill out, drink lattes, talk crap become dense

if i don't get a little bit stronger
my life could become trite  ditzy and  bland
with lots more time to twitter and ponder

when may bush and olives scent my small hands
the skies, stars  and  silence searing my soul
time slips away like crushed shell in the sand

outback and city, a part of my life
so - just as well i'm a patient man's wife




9 comments:

  1. There is no harm being torn between the two. Love and enjoy both of them. I cannot imagine you being ditzy!

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  2. I am very versatile oldegg....if necessary I can do a very good ditzy!:)

    It is becoming harder dividing life between the two but I have had both for so long it is going to be difficult when I finally have to choose one day.
    Choice is a good theme for a poem. Did you see " Sophie's Choice"?.Imagine having to make a choice like that!

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  3. I know what you mean... it seems the two grows more and more and more apart. Cities become larger and larger, and just to leave take hours. Best would be to be able to have both.. Like your poem, and I agree choice is a great theme for a poem

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  4. Thank you Bjorn. In Sydney at peak hour (rush hour)the traffic is absolutely horrendous. We leave late at night or early afternoon (8 hour drive)This is a relatively short drive in Australia. The distances are vast.

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  5. time slips away like crushed shell in the sand


    cool line that...i have always been torn between the city and the country...have lived in both and at different times i pine for the other...

    nice job on the form

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  6. Yes I think it is a common condition...I have that for other countries as well.It's all good and you want everything:)Thank you Brian!

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  7. I certainly appreciate this. One of the reasons I chose to move to Auckland was that it's a spread out city, so I live in a rural township, but only 40 minutes from the downtown city centre (I will have my cake and eat it!)

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  8. I have never been to New Zealand. Must check it out!

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  9. I think you are fortunate to have both city and outback to enjoy. And yes, I am sure a choice of one or the other will be a difficult one one day!

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