Heart like crystal, if stepped upon...its gone forever.........lovely imagination!!
fool me once,shame on you,fool me twice,shame on meshort and pointed...
yes...I like that!
If only we could all live by this code. In my experience, when we can place our hearts to someone else's keeping, we give them unconditionally.
Both poems ~~ fantastic!!!
I like the tanka form--very well done, crystal clear in fact.
If only we were all that strong.
"you can trample on my heartbut it will be only once" Sounds almost like a veiled threat!!The three words well used!!
Heart like crystal, if stepped upon...its gone forever.........lovely imagination!!
ReplyDeletefool me once,
ReplyDeleteshame on you,
fool me twice,
shame on me
short and pointed...
yes...I like that!
DeleteIf only we could all live by this code. In my experience, when we can place our hearts to someone else's keeping, we give them unconditionally.
ReplyDeleteBoth poems ~~ fantastic!!!
ReplyDeleteI like the tanka form--very well done, crystal clear in fact.
ReplyDeleteIf only we were all that strong.
ReplyDelete"you can trample on my heart
ReplyDeletebut it will be only once"
Sounds almost like a veiled threat!!
The three words well used!!