Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Thursday, November 28, 2013

For The Weekend



dverse...a conceit


the young fresh rose
soft petal'd and blush pink
has captured the desire
of the bruised
ardent horse stinger
knotting strands of gold
around her long elegant stem

after courtship
chaperoned by a gaggle
of black geese and hunters
she adorns white tulle and lace






pins herself to his lapel
till death do they part




14 comments:

  1. Yes...I agree.Will pen a poem to this one. Nice to see you here again.

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  2. Great piece, very nostalgic and sentimental..speak softly....Thanks Rallentanda!

    Hank

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  3. What might have been .... so tragic for both.

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  4. ah if only more lasted until death did them part, you know...
    i could only get about half the vid to play
    by dodo's comment i assume it ends bad?

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  5. I cannot believe you have not seen the" Godfather"...one of the great movies of all time!
    Get thee to a dvd store pronto:)

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  6. this hints to a not so good ending... and i confess...i haven't seen the godfather... i should i know....there's an endless list with movies i should've seen...one day i'll be playing catch up...smiles

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  7. Understated but sensually so. (It was either a very short courtship or a very persistent bruise.)

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  8. It was love and innocence .... for both it was murdered by the evil of men.

    Watch the movies ... there are few better!

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  9. What a romantic piece.. I swoon at your words :-)

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