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Rallentanda

Saturday, November 2, 2013

Haiku Heights



it smells like old boots
a death sentence in asia
but hey i am cool!



fizzy cold champagne
bananas in pyjamas
the grass looks greener

and so do the bananas
who've slipped into mauve wetsuits

4 comments:

  1. A very interesting take on the prompt. That was not my first thought but certainly fitting.

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  2. I love your takes on the prompt...thank you !
    Peace
    Siggi

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  3. Very interesting observation !! Very well written.

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  4. I like your playful sense of humor... Plus your approach to this haiku is truly original and pretty hilarious. enjoyed it!
    Eliz

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