Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Thursday, April 17, 2014

Mid Week Motif Poets United




the men
sat and wept
hiding in a room praying
thinking it  was all over

the women
when they saw the empty tomb
smiling
threw their baskets of ointments in the air
they knew

He appeared to many
and spread the joy

it was a time of sunshine
and many fragrances
myrrh rose and lemon blossom
lingered where he walked

 He had risen
and when He ascended
a corner stone
was set in place to build upon
a new way of thinking
and a new way of living

2000 years ago




















7 comments:

  1. That last line is weighty as stone Rallentanda..finely placed..and love the quote about the keys..

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  2. I love the sensory details which makes 2000 years ago just a day away.

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  3. beautifully captivated the True Sunshine....

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  4. Beautifully told. I love all the scents.

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  5. Hi, I'm visiting from Poets United. I loved the details, the understated way of showing the wisdom among the women

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