Rallentanda

Rallentanda

Sunday, June 15, 2014

Haiku Horizons

pandora,do not
open the box otherwise
mayhem will occur



open sesame
not a good password for the
internet , i think


who killed kennedy?
no one knows, it is not an
open and shut case



i open my heart
to you, because you make time
for me, thank you friend




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16 comments:

  1. LeonaJune 15, 2014 at 10:58 PM

    All nice ones, but I like the last one especially.

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  2. Englepappa/ Ole JNJune 15, 2014 at 11:20 PM

    Nice haiku!

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  3. J Cosmo NewberyJune 16, 2014 at 2:44 AM

    As I look at the world around me, it's hard not to feel that Pandora's box has not just been opened but emptied out on the floor.

    [Open1Sesa2me] might work.

    JFK - we will never know. Does it matter, I wonder.

    We all need an ear. There is noting so depressing as feeling that there is no-one who you can talk to.

    All nicely done.



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    1. rallentandaJune 16, 2014 at 5:31 AM

      Yes we all need someone to be really interested in how we are feeling...not just going through the motions of politesse...a true friend is hard to find!

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  4. Ramesh SoodJune 16, 2014 at 2:55 AM

    Interesting takes.. I liked the last one..

    Visit me here.. http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2014/06/she-opens-door-haiku.html

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  5. UnknownJune 16, 2014 at 8:32 AM

    Hi, Rallentanda, each one is mind blowing!! Very interesting!!

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  6. AnonymousJune 16, 2014 at 9:46 AM

    woo ! love the first one and other two ,they are so powerful !
    hope you will like my OPEN too !

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  7. jazzytowerJune 16, 2014 at 9:53 AM

    lovely set!!

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  8. Reading PleasureJune 16, 2014 at 11:57 AM

    As always, interestingly written.

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  9. AnonymousJune 16, 2014 at 2:03 PM

    Wow! they are all great...really love the "friend one" though:)

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  10. ReshmaJune 16, 2014 at 4:43 PM

    Enjoyed your takes esp Pandora's box and open sesame :)

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  11. PanchaliJune 17, 2014 at 7:05 AM

    Yeah...better not to ope the Pandora box! Hahaha...Nice set....

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  12. Gillena CoxJune 17, 2014 at 7:24 AM

    luv the supporting images, haiku and image 3 is my favourite

    much love...

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  13. AnonymousJune 18, 2014 at 3:48 PM

    I'm glad to see Pandora in poetry. Nicely done. Good pictures to. Entertaining.

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  14. AnonymousJune 18, 2014 at 6:35 PM

    rats! I'll have to change my password now! ;)

    Love this series of haiku - so many senses of the word "open".

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  15. Ankita June 18, 2014 at 10:41 PM

    loved all but the first one rocks!

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